I am a student at in Uru Mānuka. In 2020 I was a year 7 and in 2021 I will be a year 8. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note....some work won't be edited - just my first drafts, so there may be some surface errors. I would love your feedback, comments, thoughts and ideas.
Hi Mea, I really like the way you made the background the color yellow because it looks like gold and how you wrote that gold makes people happy, Maybe next time you could add full stops on each of the sentences but other than that I really like your blog post.
I agree with Qyn... good choice with background colour... and good choice of words too..I like your line that describes gold's appearance as 'light and shimmery'. You need to add your acrostic poem GOLD RUSH..see me if you're not sure how to do that.
Hi Mea,
ReplyDeleteI really like the way you made the background the color yellow because it looks like gold and how you wrote that gold makes people happy, Maybe next time you could add full stops on each of the sentences but other than that I really like your blog post.
I agree with Qyn... good choice with background colour... and good choice of words too..I like your line that describes gold's appearance as 'light and shimmery'. You need to add your acrostic poem GOLD RUSH..see me if you're not sure how to do that.
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