My Hotspot Writing

Hi guys,

Today I'm going to be sharing with you my hotspot writing.

 We had to write five sentences that would relate to our five senses. The five senses are hear, see, touch, taste, and emotion.

Here is the picture that we were describing...



Here is my work...

1. The Thunder sounded like dying cats.
2. The lightning turned the sky bright as the sun.
3. The smell of the lightning hitting the sea smelt like smoked tuna.
4. The hills in the distance look mysterious.
5. The taste of the salty water tasted weird in my mouth.

I will also be sharing with you some of the feedback that my teacher has given me.

My work is also a working progress. I haven't finished it yet we are still editing.

I hope that you can give me good feedback on my work.

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Goodbye!