Writing learning

Hi Guys,

Today I'm going to be telling you about what I have been learning in writing this term.

We have been learning to write a narrative and change I to The, and to make our sentence descriptive.

We are currently all writing a narrative. A narrative is a another name for a story.

Miss D told us to think of a big problem and then come up with other little problems that would involved around our big problem.

We also had to come up with ideas and put them into a google drawing as if they are sticky notes.

Then we started to write our narrative, my narrative was about a girl named Ana and one day her parents went to the shop and they left her by her self at there house and they never came back.

I tried my hardest to make my narrative descriptive so here is my paragraph that I think I did the best in...

I was sitting nervously in the living room just by myself waiting and waiting for my parents

to come home. The light sun was burning on my back… it had been a long time since I had seen them. I was getting a bit worried.

I hope you like what I have come up with.

Thank you for reading my blog come again soon!

Goodbye!