KIA Ora welcome back to a new post
Today I will be sharing with you my writing for Friday
today's prompt was ...and it was all a dream i had a lot of thinking put into this .
Myself and finau were buddy's for editing we both had to read our writing until there was a mistake it made prof reading a lot easier .
Here is my writing for Friday i really hope you like it
After 2 days everything was super clean so we didn't have to do anything to the Bach and that meant that we could go swimming.
Me and my dad were on the boat paddling of to Akaroa we made it then dad stayed in the boat well i run across the street and into the fish and chip shop to go get my uncle Henry he help us get some things for he Bach like food and some plates and forks and stuff like that it was really fun to get all of the stuff and then dad got me some fish and chips the funny thing was we were still in our wet suits when we finished our fish and chips uncle Henry took us around the back and i got to go in the freezer .
thank you for reading my writing if you have any fead back please comment any misyakes or things that i can work on , Goodbye.